朗斯写作范文B2推荐5篇
朗斯写作范文B2 第一篇
这篇pass水平的范文写了六段:第一段介绍这封信的写作目的,第二段介绍曾经的工作经验,第三段写了自己对于美食的喜好,第四段讲了自己为什么适合这份工作,第五六段为结束语。
假设每个评分角度满分3分,这篇文章评分如下:
◉ 任务完成度:2分,题目中问到的要点都已包含在内,文章体裁和语气较为准确
◉ 语法:1分,语法使用不够丰富,有些语法有严重错误,影响理解
◉ 词汇:1分,词汇和拼写有些许错误,一些词汇用得不准确
◉ 结构:2分,这封信的结构安排较为合理,但标点符号和句式结构有错误
朗斯写作范文B2 第二篇
1)形容词+名词 different cultures
2)名词(定语从句)(对人就用who,对东西就用that,英文中主句和从句都需要有完整的句子结构,完整的句子结构一定有主语和谓语)
①在主语后面修饰:主语(定语从句)+谓语+(宾语)
People who shop online can save money.
②在宾语后面修饰:主语+谓语+宾语(定语从句)
Governments should take actions that can r
educe air pollution.③主语+谓语+(宾语),which is why/means (这个句子非常好哈,结构清晰而且还增加了句子的长度,大家可以多用)
My father forced me to work as a public servant, which means that I had to give up my dream of studying abroad.
I prefer studying abroad, which is why I had a quarrel with my father.
PS:定语从句修饰名词可以改为分词短语修饰名词。(分词短语修饰名词可以被看作是定语从句的缩略模式---连接词被省略掉了,动词只剩下分词形态,一定没有be动词)
主动关系-现在分词
young adults shopping online=young adults who shop online
inpiduals studying abroad=inpiduals who study abroad
被动关系-过去分词
money spent on different products=money which was spent on different products
animals used for experiment=animals which were used for experiment
3)名词(介词短语)(我一般用from, with, between, against, in favor of)
cultures from different countries
job with a high salary
relationship between food and health
people against animal testing
people in favour of doing sports
朗斯写作范文B2 第三篇
1)并列连词and or but yet...---也就是把两个句子连在一起,英语中逗号是不可以直接连接句子的,两个句子必须要有连词连接。
并列词可以并列句子或者词,因为怕出错我主要用and, but, or
①Running makes me become healthy, and swimming is good for my health. (前后主语不一样要加逗号)
②He is a high school student and loves doing sports.(前后主语一样不要加逗号)
2)状语从句 ①时间-when, after ②原因-because ③条件-if ④结果-so (我比较喜欢用这四种不会出错哈哈哈) ⑤让步-while ⑥伴随-as
①When, After-限定时间+扩展句子
When I was a high school student, I was a huge fan of sports.(从句在前要加逗号)
I was a huge fan of sports when I was a high school student.(从句在后不要加逗号)
After finishing homework, I always do some sports to relax.
②Because-限定原因+扩展句子
Doing sports is not a waste of time because it help us relax.
③If-限定条件+扩展句子(一般情况下是主将从现)
If teenagers do sports every day, their physical health will be improved.
④So (that)- 表示结果+扩展句子
These teenagers do sports every day so that they have a strong body.
These teenagers do sports every day, so they have a strong body.
PS:因为so这个词比较神奇,既能作为并列连词也能作为从属连词,作为并列连词前面要加逗号,作为从属连词前面不用加逗号,为了放心起见,咱用so that,这样前面不用加逗号。
⑤While-让步关系,表示虽然+扩展句子
While some people believe that ..., others think that....(这种句型可以用在朗思C1小作文 一些人认为,另一些人认为...这种balance观点题中的首段作为Task Response,注意,这种题两种人群的观点都要在文中回应)
⑥As-伴随关系,随着+扩展句子
As air pollution is getting more and more serious, we have to take action.
3)介词短语(所以看到介词短语有两个基本作用,一个修饰名词,一个在句首或句尾限定/补充句子) 在英语中,只要不是一定需要以动词形态出现的概念,都可以借助介词来表达。
介词短语放在句首或句尾,作为对完整句的限定/补充
Without doing sports, we cannot live a healthy life.
By doing sports, we could live a healthy life.
Before the Internet, people engaged in community activity to have fun.
Among the three countries, British consumers spend the most money.
PS:浅说一下介词使用组合:
介词+名词 Because of you,...
介词+doing Without doing sports,
介词+名词+doing/done... With fossil fuels consumed at a surprising speed,
朗斯写作范文B2 第四篇
这篇high pass水平的范文共分三段:第一段介绍来信的目的;第二段用三个理由介绍了自己为什么适合这份工作(也就是题目中提到的三个要点);第三段为结束语。
假设每个评分角度满分3分,这篇文章评分如下:
◉ 任务完成度:3分,题目中问到的要点都全部包含
◉ 语法:2分,使用了较为丰富的语法,大部分都是准确的,有少部分不影响句意的错误
◉ 词汇:2分,有些词汇不适用于正式场合,出现基本的拼写错误,但也用了一些出色的词汇
◉ 结构:3分,结构安排和格式非常合理,是一封正式的求职信
本期关于朗思英语考试的英语范文就为大家分析到这里,同学们可以联系我索取样题范文呦~~
朗斯写作范文B2 第五篇
比如:
学生应该有自由。(students should have freedom)-自由是名词,所以可以修饰,所以可以写成
学生应该有自己去做他们自己的决定。(Students should have freedom to make their own decisions.)-然后我们在扩展一下
学生应该有自由去做他们自己的决定,因为着可以帮助他们学到教训。(Students should have freedom to make their own decisions because it helps them to learn lessons.)